Thursday, February 27, 2014

Chicken Truck Causes Pile-up


A semi-truck carrying chickens made an illegal left turn onto McFarland Blvd. around 6 p.m. Wednesday causing an 11 car pile-up injuring 25 people.

 

The chaotic accident occurred when the truck turned on its side while making a sharp turn at the corner of McFarland and 15th. While many involved suffer bruising, only two persons sustained injuries of note. At least 30 chickens were killed with over 300 injured.

 

The Alabama Poultry, Inc., truck driver and a local retired kindergarten teacher suffered substantial injuries. Jeff Johnson, 45, and Sarah Bernell, 63, were transported to the local hospital. Bernell suffered a minor concussion but both are presently in good condition, according to spokesperson Clarence DiMotta.

 

Johnson, an Alberta City native, was transporting the chickens to a new farm near Gadsden. The farm holds about 20,000 chickens which supply eggs to IGA stores across the south. The accident’s dead and missing chickens have cost Johnson’s company over $700, according to the company’s president Carlton Fitzsimmons.

 

Police sergeant John Jones claims that over 40 chickens are still missing and should be returned if found. Jones describes the accident as a chaotic scene.

 

“It was the biggest pile-up I’ve ever see. Lots and lots of smashed bumpers but the worst part was the screams of the chickens. Those things sure do make a lot of noise, you know,” states Jones.

 

Any damages to the 12 vehicles involved were minor.

 

 

 

 

 

HW 2/25

Who: Duane LaChance (53), a pipe fitter
What: third-degree burns + hospital trip
When: Thursday at 3 p.m.
Where: Petal Municipal Power Plant, Mississ.
Why: installing new pipes on roof
How: accidently touched wrench to a 15,000 volt power line

A Gross Engineers pipe fitter was taken to the hospital after suffering 3rd degree burns while installing a new pipe on the roof of the Petal Municipal Power Plant in Mississippi Thursday at 3 p.m.

Who: Paul McCartney, famous rock singer
What: entered hospital for voice surgery
When: Thursday
Where: Riverside Hospital
Why: Voice had been reduced to whisper
How: large concert to 1,000 fans

Rock singer Paul McCartney checked into Riverside Hospital late Wednesday after his Bennett Auditorium concert and is scheduled for voice surgery Thursday.

Who: Hattiesburg Board of Education
What: board met
When: Thursday morning
Where:
Why: to discuss enrollment, new dress code rules, and cafeteria improvements
How: discussion and votes

The Hattiesburg Board of Education met Thursday morning to discuss enrollment, new dress code rules and cafeteria improvements.

Who: rural sociology associate professor John Dumont and English associate professor George Johnson (Backwater State University)
What: injured in plane crash that killed five epersons
When: Thursdya night
Where: Kennedy International Runway
Why: returning home from separate conferences in NYC and aboard the same TWA jet
How: takeoff

Two Backwater State University professor were injured in a plane crash that killed five persons Thursday night on the Kennedy International Airport runway.

Who: noted author, Pulitzer Prize winner Norman Meeman
What: spoke to audience of 67
When: 4:30 p.m. Sunday
Where: Room 111 of William Oxlet Thompson Memorial Library
Why: speak on writing, works, prizes
How: used words

Pulitzer Prize winner Norman Meeman spoke on his writing to 67, most English, students Sunday at 4:30 p.m. at the Oxlet Thomspon Memorial Library.

Who: Freedom Foundation, Clement Crabtree, professor of horticulture
What: received George Washington Honor Medal for “Plan for Peace” essay
When: last week
Where: ceremony in Pennsylvania
Why: best essay
How: essay urged distribution of free packets of red, white and blue flower seeds to nation

The George Washington Honor Medal was awarded to 32 essay winners last Thursday at the Pennsylvania ceremony.

Thursday, February 20, 2014

HW 2/18/14


Ex. 5.8 pg. 99
  • list 5 Ws + H
  • write just lead sentence
  1. A jet aircraft crashed in the Super Shopping Mall parking lot Monday at noon killing the pilot, an Air Force major, and destroying 15 cars. (25 words, blind/summary lead)
    1. Who: Air Force major Rufus N. Hebernowski
    2. What: crashed his jet aircraft, destroying 15 cars and killing himself 
    3. When: today at noon
    4. Where: Super Shopping Mall, western side of town, north parking lot
    5. Why: ?
    6. How: ?
  2. The City Council will increase property taxes by 10 percent amounting to a $50 yearly increase beginning the first of next month. (22 words, straight lead)
    1. Who: city council
    2. What: increasing property taxes by 10 percent
    3. when: first of next month
    4. where: in city
    5. why: to double the size of city park
    6. how: by increasing about $50 yearly
  3. The Liberty University vice president has announced a 15 percent pay raise to faculty and staff at the university effective this fall. (straight lead, 22 words)
    1. Who: Harold R. Drazsnzak, university vice president
    2. What: will give 15 percent pay raise to faculty and staff
    3. When: effective in the fall
    4. where: at the university
    5. why: faculty is long overdue to get a raise
    6. how: made possible by the increased revenue from the state
  4. An impending boycott of all journalism classes was discussed by 200 students in the Journalism Student Association meeting Thursday at noon. (21 words, summary lead)
    1. who: journalism student association
    2. what: meeting
    3. when: today at noon
    4. where:?
    5. why: to discuss boycott
    6. how: gathered 200 students
*answer who, what, when, where...increase 'what' if sentence is short, add 'why' if important and there is room to add it into lead...remember: most important info goes right up front, use order of sentence to put most important things first (rankings)

CNA #5: Pop Culture

CNA #5 : Pop culture news

Jimmy Fallon and the new 'Tonight': What's the verdict?

After five years as host of "Late Night", Jimmy Fallon debuted as host of "The Tonight show" Monday and he was a hit. Highlights of Fallon's first show were the appearances of Will Smith, Fallon's dad, and popular band U2. In one humorous moment, Fallon noted that a "buddy" owed him $100 for betting that he would never host "The Tonight Show" and the statement was followed by a parade of celebrities carrying $100 bills. 

Justin Timberlake blames 'health reasons' as he postpones New York show

Justin Timberlake has postponed his Wednesday night concert at Madison Square Garden to Friday night due to "health reasons", according to his twitter. Timberlake will still perform Thursday and Friday at the Garden and will appear on "The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon" Friday night. "The 20/20 Experience World Tour" will take Justin Timberlake through North America, Europe, Asia, and the Middle East over the next 6 months.

Lawyer: 'Wolf of Wall Street' defamed me; suit seeks film's removal from theaters

Andrew Greene is suing the filmmakers of the 'Wolf of Wall Street' for depicting his character as criminal, depraved, and drug-using. The character Nicky "Rugrat" Koskoff has only a small role in the motion picture but Greene claims Paramount Pictures has forever damaged his professional and personal reputation. Greene is demanding that the film be removed from theaters and is suing for $25 million. 

Tuesday, February 18, 2014

Chapter 5 Notes

Chapter 5: Journalism

Why is news important?

News Culture
  • Central point in society, brings us together (convergence, citizen journalism)
  • Basic form of passing info
What makes something news?
Elements of news:
  • Impact
  • Timeliness (getting the news out before the event happens/ being the first to report breaking news)
  • Prominence (i.e. George Bush choking on a pretzel)
  • Proximity (tend to care more about things that happen close by)
  • Conflict (sports)
  • Bizarre/Unusual (when dog bites man- not news....but when man bites dog...)
  • Currency (slow news cycle- some unimportant occurances can be elevated in slow times)
Answer these questions:
  • Who
  • What
  • When
  • Where
  • Why
  • How
Inverted Pyramid
  • style in which we order the information
  • most important info at the top, bottom of the story is least important info
  • goal is to pass on the info quickly to reader, not get them to read through the whole thing
  • Format
    • first sentence = Lead
    • 2nd paragraph = take an aspect of the lead and expand, give more info
    • Body= more info, evidence, context, details, direct and indirect quotes
    • ending= when you run out of things to say, dont dwell on ending-it's not important, just stop when you've said all info
Headline

  • A good headline is clear and specific.
  • It is an abstracted sentence of 5 to 10 (max) words.
  • must contain a subject and verb or even better, a subject, verb, and object (joined by as, of, with, etc.)
  • consider it a sales pitch for the story
  • use specific information and concrete wording
  • should not repeat the words used in the lead
  • based on the main idea of the story
  • for past or present occurrence, USE PRESENT TENSE.
  • for future occurrence use the infinitive form of a verb (to run, to go)
  • Do not use articles
  • use comma instead of and conjunction
  • no headline should start with a verb
  • SEO (search engine optimization)- use words that can be picked up by people googling the topic


Lead
  • Opening paragraph (lead) is ONE SENTENCE.
  • It sets forth the theme of the story. 
  • most important info
  • will unify writing for the reader
  • Look to answer: who, what, where, when
6 Styles of Leads
  1. Straight News Lead: one sentence long, around 30 words *if ppl died, always include in first sentence*
  2. Summary Lead: when there is more than one major fact to be covered (one sentence, 30 words)
  3. Blind Lead: Names not used, revealed in 2nd paragraph *Never use someone's name in the lead sentence unless they are well-known; instead describe person in lead sentence and use name in second paragraph*
  4. Direct address lead: reader is addressed, use sparingly (ex. If gardening is your
  5. Question lead: asks ?, use sparingly
  6. Direct Quote Lead: needs to be highly compelling and informative, use sparingly
Story
Developing the Story
  • Think of the audience, "What would I want to know next?", put yourself in reader's shoes
  • Rules for using direct quotes:
    • Only quote if ppl need to hear exact words or if you cannot say it better
    • first direct quote should appear close to tope of the story: 3rd paragraph (through 6th)
    • avoid one quote after another
    • direct quote should be ITS OWN PARAGRAPH
    • paragraph begins with quotations marks then comma then close quotation marks, then name + said/stated.
      • "My class is fantastic," Amy Bonebright said.
      • name is before 'said' because it is more important

[How to tell a story that people will read:
How to tell a story that people will watch/ listen to:]

Chapter 4 Class Notes

Chapter 4: Writing in the Media Environment

Three Main Sources for Gathering Info
  1. People
  2. Records (stored sources)
  3. Observations (personal)
Attribution- telling the audience where the info came from (so they can decide the credibility)

Gathering Info: People
  • People are the main source of information.
  • Two types of quotes from an interview:
    • Direct Quote- used because could not be written better than said
    • Indirect Quote- paraphrase the info gathered (still use attribution)
  • Steps to a successful interview:
    • Identify purpose and angle of story
    • Prepare through research and write out questions
      • Six Question Types
        1. Close-Ended (can be used to force someone to commit to one side)
        2. Open-Ended
        3. Hypothetical (great when interviewing someone running for office)
        4. Agree/Disagree (X said Z about you, do you agree or disagree?)
        5. Probes
        6. Personal

Wednesday, February 12, 2014

CNA #4: National News


Shirley Temple, a Hollywood superstar as a child, dies at 85

Singer, dancer and actress Shirley Temple died of natural causes Monday in her California home while surrounded by family. The curly-haired film star was America's top box-office draw in the 1930s. Her appearances in Curly Top and The Littlest Rebel led 20th Century Fox to develop a writing team that created over 40 films starring Temple.
  • prominence

Starbucks responds to Dumb Starbucks in L.A.



Dumb Starbucks opened in Los Angeles Friday. The store inserted the word 'dumb' in front of the trade-marketed Starbucks logo, menu, and cup sizes (dumb frappuccino, dumb grande, etc.). Originally the parody company skirted past the law by claiming to be an art gallery rather than a coffee shop but the store was shut down Monday when Comedy Central comedian Nathan Fielder revealed he was behind the "work of parody art".
  • bizarre/unusual

South braces for 'mind-boggling if not historical' storm

A 3-day storm is expected to begin traveling up the east coast Tuesday. The storm could be catastrophic with ice accumulation. Georgia has entered a state-of-emergency while some claim the country is overreacting.
  • impact
  • proximity
  • bizarre/unusual




Wednesday, February 5, 2014

Chapter 3 Exercises

3.6, 3.7, 3.8
3.6

  1. first; adverse weather
    • An event is not 'annual' if it is the first time.
  2. It's; all right; excess
    • 'All right' is always two words.
  3. As (not like)
  4. Capitol; Louisiana; Road
  5. The mayor; dissent; City Council
    • 'City council' capitalized if referring to a specific city council.
  6. flair for fashion
  7. The bomb destroyed Sen. Kitsmoot's
    • Omit the words 'totally', 'very' and 'really' (excessive and redundant).
  8. My bright green Chevrolet
    • 'Which' is used for a nonessential clause and must have commas.
  9. elicited; Midville City Council
  10. correct
  11. principles
  12. cited
3.7
  1. 25-year-old; Hattiesburg, Miss.
  2. Nov. 10
  3. Drive; St.
  4. $130
  5. correct
  6. At 7 p.m.,
  7. On Thursday, the terrorists...
    • If day of the week is first word of sentence, use 'on' in front.
    • Use a specific day of the week rather than 'yesterday', 'tomorrow' or 'today'.
  8. Twenty-two...
  9. correct (five percent)
  10. correct (2 feet)
  11. Smith bet $50.....Chevrolet.
    • Omit courtesy titles.
    • Always use Chevrolet not Chevy (unless quoting).
  12. the governor of California; Sept. 1
  13. McDonald Drive
  14. 1970s
3.8
  1. In August; Augusta, Georgia.
  2. Sen. Gramm's
  3. About 1,200 Easter rabbits
  4. In the 1980s
  5. to the governor
  6. 8%
  7. $40
  8. three university professors; 25th Ave.
  9. the Midwest
  10. Dec. 11, 
  11. On Thursday morning, the mayor
  12. 2 million miles
  13. Dr. Kildare
  14. 8 p.m., Gov. Jim; Gorgas Library 

CNA #3: The Olympic Games 2014



Team USA is sending 230 athletes to the Olympic Games this year. The team is a combination of veteran gold medal champions and hungry new stars hoping to shine in Sochi. Fans should watch for Shaun White (snowboarder), Ted Ligety (alpine skiing), Shani Davis (long track speed skating), Gracie Gold (figure skating) and Sarah Hendrickson (ski jumping). 


This year Olympic figure skating will hold its first-ever team event. The team figure-skating event will involve both a short and long program of men's, ladies, pairs, and ice dance skates from each team. Experts say Russia, Canada and Team USA are the favored teams to take the podium. 

Beginning Feb. 7, the world will watch 16 days of 2,871 athletes from 87 nations compete for 98 gold medals. The opening ceremony will take place Friday at Fisht Stadium in Olympic Park. Some  events will begin Thursday before the official start time. 

Monday, February 3, 2014

Chapter 3 Exercises Cont.

3.3, 3.4, 3.5 Chapter Exercises

3.3

  1. trafficking
  2. Graham; his will
  3. [correct]
  4. lifelike, [correct,] interracial, IOUs
  5. pianos, nationwide, PTA, Vietnam War
  6. at noon Tuesday.
  7. U. S.; the South as a 16-state
  8.  verbal skills; oral contract
  9.  [correct]
  10.  harass; accommodate; [correct;] likable
  11. doughnut, pantsuit, plow, National Weather Service
3.4
  1. The Department of Defense; missile
  2. FCC, hitchhiker, $3[, correct]
  3. wife, son and mother
  4. 10-year-old child, 5 p.m., 5,300
  5. The Cardinals; World Series, 7-5
  6. [correct, correct, correct] South
  7. Nov. 15, February, March 16
  8. Thirteen; traveled; Austin, Texas, for...
    • A numeral is spelled out if it appears first in a sentence.
    • Texas is never abbreviated.
  9. 10 cents
  10. homemade[, correct, correct, correct]
3.5
  1. United States; U.S.
  2. upward, Labour, Avenue, cupfuls, eyeing
  3. the Democrat
  4. Drs. John Smith and Mary Wilson
  5. goodwill, USS Eisenhower, cigarette, mid-America
  6. communist nor
  7. pacemaker
  8. heir-brained
  9. pre-empt, speedup, 55 mph, hooky
  10. The Mafia